Sequnece at crit

The crit was useful. With positive comments an constructive criticism coming in equal measures.
The edit so far needs cleaning up.
A few more seconds of black at the start so the Blake quote can be read and digested before moving on to the moving image.
The same goes for the end of the sequnece. More time with the title legibale before the fade out at the end to give a lasting impact and set the tone.
The character names will be done using tweaked presets from adobe Bridge. Hand written font acting as a scribble to give a short intro. Names to Faces.
There are also a few masking issues i had that need sorting. Just for constant tones of colours. I want it to feel like a scrap book, not actually be scraooily put together. I want there to be control over the out come and hopefully have a clinical finish to the sequence.